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标  题: 四级写作
发信站: 饮水思源 (2006年03月26日15:15:28 星期天), 站内信件

写作（上）

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评分标准
? Global scoring/reward scores, not based on the number of the language 
errors
? 1.本题满分为15分。
? 2.阅卷标准共分五等：14分，11分，8分，5分及2分
? 3.根据优劣加减1分
? 4.评分标准
? 14分---切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别
小错。
? 11分---切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。
? 8分---基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多。，其中
有一些是严重错误。
? 5分---基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
? 2分---条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分,句子均有错误，且多数为严重错
误。
扣分与得分率
? Cet4 90-99 80-89 70-79 60-69 50-55 ,<49
? Cet6 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 70-79 <69
? 扣分 1 2 3 5 7 9


4956Advantages of a Job Interview
Sample(scores14)
? Now, when a person is hunting for a job, there will always be a job 
interview and I think the job interview has a lot of advantages.The 
interviewer and the interviewee can know about each other through it.
? First the interview can tell something about the job to the interviewee 
such as the wage, the work conditions and something else which is relevant 
to the job. Then the interviewee can decide whether the job is really 
suitable for him. Second, I think the job interview is a good chance for 
the interview, because, he can impress the interviewer by good behaviour. 
He can show both his ability and his confidence.Then the interviewer can 
figure out whether he is the right person for the job.
? In a word, I think the interview will do good to both the interviewer and 
the interviewee. By the interview, the interviewee can find a suitable job 
and the interviewer can find a suitable person if both of them make the 
best of the job interview.
4956Advantages of a Job Interview
Sample(scores11)
? If you are finding a job, you will generally attend a job interview.Job 
interview is a good form in which interviewers and interviewees can learn 
information from each other. This is very important.The interviewers can 
find out some good interviewees in the interview, and the interviewers can 
get suitable jobs.
? In the interview, the interviewers can introduce some information about 
their companies to the interviewees, such as work condition, rewards and 
some other things. This will makes it clear to the interviewees whether the 
job is suitable or not.
? The interviewees also have chance to give the interviewers good 
impressions. They can show their education backgrounds, work experiences 
and the confidence to the job. Thus the interviewers can select some good 
interviewees.
4956Advantages of a Job Interview
Sample(scores 8)
? Have you ever had a job interview? It have been popularly in the last few 
years, because job interview has many advantages. The advantages of a job 
interview are, the interviewer and interviewee can learn each other. First, 
the interviewee would be informed much about the company or department. He 
will know, if he had this job, what he would do, what condition he would 
work in, what he would be paid. Second, the interviewee have an opportunity 
to make a good impression to the interviewer. He can show himself in 
various ways. He can show his education level, his ability, his confidence. 
That make it possible that the interviewer knows the interview well.
? The job interview have such many adovantages, so it will be used more and 
more in the future.
4956Advantages of a Job Interview
Sample(scores5)
? Now, with the following develope of science and enducation,More and more 
students find a job. They must pass a Job Interview. There are many 
advantages of a Job Interview. First, through interviewer talking with 
interviewee, they can know each other.
? Second, most interviewees want to know sample, conditions, kind of work, 
in detail, all of these will be introduced by interviewers.
? Of course, the interviewee can have a chance to express his encourages 
and his background of enducation, ability of work. If he was employed, he 
will get along with the boss.
? In the future, we can find a job which we like to do and the boss will 
employe men who he needs.
4956Advantages of a Job Interview
Sample(scores2)
? Today Interview has become a important part of find job. Interviewer and 
interviewee can know information each other by interview. Interviewer usual 
intrdonction their company’s information. They ought to intrdonction the 
job that interviewee will to do and condiation of job. Interviewer and 
interviewee’ll disscus wage. Interviewee ought to have a good visual 
during interview and can get interviewer a feeling: you just who they need. 
Of couse interview shall intrdiction his information, for example,level of 
study,job ability.Interview is very good. It can make interviewer and 
intcrviewee both feeling statify.
Language Problems
? 1. Pronoun and substitute
? 2.modification
? 3.agreement of tenses,person and number
? 4. Parallelism
? 5.grammar(voice,comparison,v-ed,v-ing ,article,uncountable nouns, tense 
etc)
? 6.incomplete sentence
? 7.conjunction
? 8.collocation
? 9.wrong usages
? 10.verbal(In my opinion, I believe )(rewrite again) cooperate together
? 11.Chinese English
考试命题
? 命题会考虑以下几个方面：
? 议论文说明文 （argumentative and expository writing) 可以展开议论，发表看法

? 题目与知识结构相适应，内容熟悉，有话可说。
? 与文化背景，年龄特点一致，生活，学习，理想。
? 并非任何热点问题。（e.g. religion, belief,politics, human 
right,marriage,divorce）
? 考虑学生的语言水平，词汇结构能否足够表达所考的题目。



出题的范围 
? 科学技术（计算机，克隆，电视，小汽车对生活的影响）
? 社会问题（住房，交通-工具/设施，就业，犯罪，环境，能源，教育，广告）
? 校园生活（扩大招生，选修，学习方式，居住条件，课余活动，体育锻炼，身心健康
，人际交往，兴趣爱好）
? 青少年问题（父子代沟，家庭影响，抽烟吸毒，个人理想，职业选择，文化教育，成
功失败）

论说文种类
? 比较性论说文（Analyzing-alternative Essay）
? 评论性论说文( Pro-and-con Essay )
? 阐述性论说文( Inductive Essay )
? 解释性论说文(Cause-and-effect Essay)


   写作（下）

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　 一.比较性论说文
（Analyzing-alternative Essay）

? This essay is applied to the comparison of two or more similar 
objects.Through the respective advantages and disadvantages,and choose one 
and try to prove it.
? Which form of Transport Is More Preferable?
? Where to Study---in City A.B or C?
? Which is better Source of News---Newspaper or TV?
? How to solve the energy problem?
二评论性论说文
( Pro-and-con Essay )

? This type essay is often employed to make comments on some controversial 
topic or subjects.Students are required to comment on a certain view and 
offer his own view.
? Class Attendance Should Not Be Required
? My Attitude Towards Advertising
? My Views On Forced Retirement Policies



三.阐述性论说文 
( Inductive Essay )
? The essay focuses on the illustration of the writer’s own point of view 
and expression of his reasons.
? The Importance of College Athletics
? The value of Science
? Why I came to College
四.解释性论说文
(Cause-and-effect Essay) 
? This essay is often adopted to explain and analyze the social phenomenon 
or social problems.Students are asked to examine the causes that lead to 
the problems or analyze the effects they might cause.
? Why Are Many Elderly Chinese Living Alone?
? Why Do College Graduates Have Difficulty Finding Jobs?
? What Effects TV Has on Modern Families?

The Ways of Unfolding 
? 1. Listing
? 2. Exemplification
? 3. Cause and Effect
? 4. Comparison and contrast
? 5. Definition
? 6. Classification
? 7. Process

Listing
? To begin with/in the first place/firstly, secondly,/first of all

Exemplification

? For example/specifically/for instance/as proof/such as/Another example I 
remember is / for one thing/the most striking instance of this occurred when
…/sometimes/often/…can serve as an example/to illustrate/If any further 
examples were needed, I could mention…/as an illustration/occasionally

Cause and Effect
? Cause:Because (of),since,as,for, owing to, due to, for the reason that…
? Effect: so, so as to, so that,therefore, thus, consequently,accordingly, 
as a result
? Verb: cause, result in, result from, be the result of, give rise to, 
affect, require, produce, lead to, account for, attribute to, impute to
Comparison and contrast
? Likewise/alike/similarly/the same as/both/resemble/neither…nor/Like A… 
So is B
? However/while/on the other hand/whereas/conversely/but/in contrast to/A 
and B are dissimilar in that …/on the contrary/The main difference(Another 
difference, one of the differences)between A and B is that…/ different 
from/With regard to…, A is…than B./not as…as/Unlike A
Definition
? Exposition is explanation.
? To mend is to repair.
? Nostalgia is homesickness.
? For example, explain the idea of a proverb.

? Practice makes Perfect.
? No Pains, No Gains.

Classification
? (transportation means, examinations,
? TV programmes)
? 
Classes/sections/families/categories/units/parts/kinds/divisions/groups/types
/items/sorts/aspects/…may be classified according to…/…consist of…/…fall
 into…/…can be divided into…/…may be further subdivided…/…comprises…/
…may be put into…/we may sort …into…
Process 
? First, next, after that, finally
? The sequences should be exact and accurate.
? Usually passive voice is used to introduce the actions and the process.
写作题型
? 1. My View on …题型
? 2.Advantages and Disadvantages of…题型
? 3. How to …题型
? 4. A or B …题型
? 5. Why …题型
? 6. Chart 
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