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标  题: the Song of Mirror Spirit(1)
发信站: 饮水思源 (2009年11月27日03:47:25 星期五)

既然hitomin大姐现在还比较忙,看样子短时间内还看不到她的作品了。
不过既然最近有点小空，就献丑自己写点东西了。
这个东西是自己无聊写的小故事，目前只有一小段，大家且看，轻拍...
另外也有科幻、中文的故事的计划，看大家反应再决定写不写了..

p.s. 写得很挫..如果让你感觉不适的话，先说声抱歉了... = =

The Song of Mirror Spirit

The light is dim, the night is still
Beside a mirror, there seated a crew
He sings as tortured, his face distorted
In a rush, I copied his words below:


It is May the 13th the Friday, 
when you go up to garret naughty
where you found an old mirror
its face is covered like snowy

the second you scratch its face
deep in mind appear some words
despite the creepy accent
it's almost an old man saying grace:

like you, I was once a boy
and a genius about how to be happy
if you please take me home
I will repay with fantastic story

Naive as merely little kids
You are tempted by his single promise
With sounds of wooden floor groaning
The mirror is settled in toy treasures

--
以太阳的名义
黑暗公开地掠夺
沉默  依然是东方的故事
人民在古老的壁画上
默默地永生
默默地死去    ——北岛

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